Both songs fit perfectly so it won’t make much of a difference if I chose to change my choice.

Song change?

I just added the ‘11:30′ song to the parts I have edited and it sounded better than the ‘Spin wheel’ song. I asked for an audience feedback over the two songs and it was the ‘11:30′ song. So I am very confused on what to do at the moment!!!

Feedback

I have had one person watching my short film as it is edited so far. They gave me feedback to cut some of the clips shorter and add more to the story which I will be doing tonight. My aim is to add more of the girl being upset about her dad who died. So what I was thinking is the girl running off to a park and sitting there crying and then go home really late and just fall into her mums arms then the next day will be the funeral. I think this will be better.

Too short

Editing and putting together my clips, I have realised it is going to be under 5 minutes. I now need to add clips where I have come up with the idea of  a clock turning to the time of day it is in the film. Hopefully it ill make up some time I need to make up for. At the moment the film is over 3 minutes long. So i need to get this sorted quickly.

Next..

Now I have done my filming and uploaded my shots, I am thinking about the next couple of days and what I am going to achieve out of these days.

Firstly I am going to put all my clips together in Final cut express with transitions and music. Then I am going to review my ancillary tasks and getting some feedback from my target audience.

I am also going to start producing my titles for the short film when I have finished editing it.

Onto the next step..

Now I’ve completed my filming at last I will upload my clips to put together my shots and start editing and adding transitions. Also I will need to add my chosen song to the editing which Im hoping will work.

Day light filming

I have gone to film the daylight shots I needed to do. I have made some changes at the end of the film. I have chosen to take out the idea of the girl picking the rose and saying the meaning of the flower. I think it would have spoilt the end of the film as it would have been ‘cheesy’ and just not fit in with the whole plot. I have decided to have a shot of the mum and girl hugging and the camera tilt upwards towards the sky which is an exit to the scene. Overall I think the filming went good. I achieved what I wanted to and I think the changes I made was a good change.

Animatic 2

This is the second one with the song called 11:30.

Animatic 1

This is the first one with Paperplain song called Spin Wheel.

In-between 2 songs

At the moment I am struggling to decide between two songs from Paperplain. One is called Spinning Wheel Which is quite sad and slow. then the other one is called 11:30, this is sad but has an upbeat rhythm and constant singing whereas the first song has some gaps of guitar then singing.

I am going to upload both songs onto my animatic then, with a friend, decide which song fits best to the story.